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Critiques
To me I found it describing how we all have trouble in our lives, that one shouldn't be criticized because of tiny things like spelling or grammar, but to the point one is making.
Artistically, the blue on college ruled paper reminded me of those yellow pads I used to scrawl on, so it had a nice artistic touch to it. I think if there was a bit more space between lines, it would be easier to read. But then again, that could be the point.
Cleverly done.
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